把两种选择放在同一把尺上
从线下与线上读书会选择,练习使用共同标准进行有用比较。
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- 为两个选项选择共同标准
- 用比较结构说明实际差异
- 给出适用于当前需要的结论
先决定比较什么
Suppose your club must choose between an online reading meeting and a meeting at the library. Avoid listing unrelated advantages, such as the online platform's colours and the library's opening hours. Choose shared criteria first: travel time, discussion quality, and the ability to join from different places.
假设社团要在线上读书会和图书馆聚会之间做选择。避免罗列互不相干的优点,比如线上平台的颜色与图书馆开放时间。先选共同标准:通勤时间、讨论质量,以及能否从不同地点参加。
并列示范
“An online meeting removes travel time, whereas a library meeting requires people to reach the building. In person, it may be easier to notice who wants to speak. Online, we would need a clear way to take turns. Both formats can support discussion, but they require different arrangements to work well.”
“线上聚会省去通勤时间,而图书馆聚会需要大家到达现场。面对面时,可能更容易注意谁想发言;线上则需要明确的轮流方式。两种形式都能支持讨论,但要运作顺利,需要不同安排。”
不要偷换标准
If you discuss cost for one option, discuss cost for the other too. Include relevant details instead of assuming that online always means free or that meeting in person always creates a better conversation. A platform may have fees, and a room may be available without charge. Check the actual choices.
如果讨论一个选项的费用,也应讨论另一个的费用。加入相关细节,不要假定线上永远免费,或面对面永远讨论得更好。平台可能收费,房间也可能免费提供。要核对实际选项。
形成有边界的结论
You could conclude, “Because three members are away this month, I recommend an online meeting with a chairperson to manage turns. When everyone is nearby again, we can try the library.” The recommendation is useful because it connects the comparison to a particular group and time.
你可以总结:“因为这个月有三位成员不在本地,我建议线上聚会,由主持人安排发言顺序。等大家都在附近,再试图书馆。”这个建议有用,因为它把比较与特定群体、时间联系起来。
whereas 对照两个事实
whereas 连接主语完整的分句,突出同一标准上的差异,不等于给出因果。
Online meetings need no travel, whereas library meetings require a journey.
线上聚会无需出行,而图书馆聚会需要前往现场。
Both… but…
先承认两个选项共有的能力,再说明运作条件的不同,有助于避免把比较写成单方面赞美。
Both options can work, but they need different preparation.
两个选项都能行,但需要不同准备。
常用词句
- criterion
- 标准(复数 criteria)
Travel time is one criterion for our choice.
通勤时间是我们选择的一个标准。
- whereas
- 而;然而
This room is free, whereas the other one has a fee.
这个房间免费,而另一个收费。
- format
- 形式
Which meeting format suits this group?
哪种聚会形式适合这个小组?
- relevant
- 相关的
Please include only relevant costs in the comparison.
比较时请只计入相关费用。
- take turns
- 轮流
We need a clear way to take turns online.
我们需要明确的线上轮流发言方式。